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Used to be MCSM Studios, and before that The_Green_M. Apologies for some of my more edgy older content.

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Posted by Lambtaco - October 14th, 2010


I've got about 25 comics out now, so it's time to see what people think.

We Are Not Role Models

Some of the last few haven't been my best, did them last minute.
I'm reusing the art all the time, but I'm not just making this comic, I'm also making Flash games, cartoons, videos, etc. There are plenty of comics out there that are stickmen, or copypasted MS Paint dinosaurs, or there abouts. So I figure I can get away with it.

Any comments or tips are welcome. If you're going to criticise, constructive criticism please.

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You have basically remade ctrl-alt-delete with uglier art and less funny jokes.
Their faces = :^U

As for constructive criticism, most of your comic strips would be improved if you removed every panel but the first and last, and removed all text from the last panel.

So, I looked up ctrl-alt-delete, and read the first few and the latest few. All I can say is, what are you talking about? I'll admit the art is lazier, but the only similarity I could identify is two guys living together.

I'm pretty sure your constructive criticism was a joke.

Hello well i just want to say that you may want to consider this. calling the yellow shell the lazor shell.

But, it doesn't shoot lazors.

ummm... are you like, dead or something? :/

Undead.

whats wrong with comic #43?

I named the file wrong. Fixed it.

Comment on my newspost.

No.

were you bored when you made comic #45 to #48?

I was injured.

oh. what happen?

I lifted something in a stupid way and fucked up my back, but it's all better now.

looks like everyone forgot about this..

Nobody loves me!

try a new post? o-o

(The ground of a graveyard rumbles for a moment and then all is silent ... suddenly a dark blond teen burts out from the ground sending dirt and rocks flying and strikes a pose)

I'm back!

Ok; sorry I haven't been commenting for a while, ok, a LONG while, but I've been really busy with revising and writing my book and all that. Bit I'm back now, backfrom the dead.

As once upon a time ago I have some ideas for koopa 2.

Music

Final Boss
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/265662">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/265662</a>

Inside a whale
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/150826">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/150826</a>
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/137685">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/137685</a>
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/281030">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/281030</a>

Plains
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/289980">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/289980</a>
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/360846">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/360846</a>
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/361067">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/361067</a>

Final Castle
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/194341">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/194341</a>
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/293857">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/293857</a>
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/338853">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/338853</a>

What do you think? Will that make up for my absence?

Also; how is koopa 2 coming along? There havn't been any new posts in quite a while. And according to the cuts you made it should be done by next month.

Peace out, and also good comics. The one with the fat guy was funniest. "Hey Ugly, you're ugly", classic.

Take a shower to wash off all that grave dirt. YOu're stinking up the place.

Musics:
Final Boss: Seems it's already in a famousish game. Doesn't really have the right feel or pacing. It's too slow and classicalish. 2/5
Whale 1: The mood is good, if a bit dark in places. Other times it seems too optimistic. I think it needs more consistancy. Almost seems too watery, most of the whale level is played in the air. Plus it has that annoying clap sound I hate, that brings it down from 3 to 2/5
Whale 2: Doesn't feel right at all. The song must be confined, this feels very open. IT just doesn't fit. Too long aswell. 2/5
Whale 3: I like the title. But this was in an NG sponsored game. Aside from the disqualification, it feels almost spacey. Not something that works for the most part. On the plus side it was short and sweet. 2/5
Plains 1: Not too far from what could work at the start there, but it veers off. The whole Rayman thing kinda ruins it though, it wouldn't feel original enough. Not to mention it ends in a fade. 1/5
Plains 2: Annoying claps, annoying synths, Rayman. Did I mention annoying synths? 1/5
Plains 3: I'm going to assume you put this one in the wrong category. If feels to ambient to work, but it might be some use n a Zelda type game. 1/5
Final Castle 1: Seems to lack the seriousness required by the final level. Some annoyingly ambient parts too, the dripping wouldn't work. 1/5
Final Castle 2: Reminds me of DKC, but lacking the punch. Never really seems to get anywhere. 2/5
Final Castle 3: Nice bass. Too much of a dancable thing to it though. I don't really see this in a game of any kind, except maybe DDR. 2/5

Haven't been putting much work into it. I got lazy, then go injured, and I'm just now getting back into things. Unless I go crazy busy on it I don't see it coming out in January. And even if I did go crazy on it I can't really see it getting through testing that fast.