It's alright. You could have paid more attention to grammar. I also would have liked it if you didn't include a glitch in it. This last thing isn't really your fault, but the game was running slowly in the video. Since you're not using the sound you could speed it up or something.
I feel I need to say something positive now. There was an adequate amount of gameplay footage, and the music was fun
glitch? what glitch? i didnt find any glitches.. and i know that the game was running slowly because i am using hypercam and windows movie maker. and yes true i could have sped it up but then the trailer would be short than before.
SJustin
Maybe the storyline should be:
Koopa finds out his girlfriend has been kidnapped and also that Bowser died. So he goes to kill Mario, rescue his girlfriend, and settle his king's death.
This is only a suggestion.
Lambtaco
BUt it's already been declared that BOwser is in another castle. And there have been no references to Koopa's GF. At least it's simple.